Writerverse Challenge
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For the writerverse Song challenge.
Title: Redemption?
Rating: PG-13
Original/Fandom: Original
Type: Song lyrics
Pairings (if any): unspecified m/f pairing
Warnings (Non-Con/Dub-Con/etc): contains some vague religious allusions
Summary: I'm pure but he isn't…I am his redemption, maybe
The verses, though not the chorus, are loosely based on the rhythm of "One Hand In My Pocket" by Alanis Morisette
Redemption?
I'm pure but he isn't
I'm sure 'til he brings me doubt
I'm divine, he's fallen, baby
If I'm black then he's white
If I'm earth then he's fire
I am his redemption, maybe
CHORUS
What feels so right can it be wrong?
Our passion is healing
And when I say that I love him,
I do truly mean it
If he's hurt, then I feel it
We're that intertwined
I'm on my knees begging for guidance
I'm his princess of darkness
He's the light in my life
He calls me Beloved, Lady
CHORUS
He's Vice and I'm Versa
I'm Day and he's Night
I'm a slave to my emotions
My thoughts of confession
All disappear
I find myself pledging devotion
CHORUS
One touch and I'm hungry,
One word from me makes him smile
His lips on mine give me fulfilment
I'm strong, yet he makes me weak
Though I hate to admit it,
His leaving just damn near kills me
CHORUS
Is he my downfall
Or do I raise him up?
I care but I shouldn't, should I?
No-one can understand,
Least of all I
The Morning Star, Lucifer, Venus
CHORUS
Title: Redemption?
Rating: PG-13
Original/Fandom: Original
Type: Song lyrics
Pairings (if any): unspecified m/f pairing
Warnings (Non-Con/Dub-Con/etc): contains some vague religious allusions
Summary: I'm pure but he isn't…I am his redemption, maybe
The verses, though not the chorus, are loosely based on the rhythm of "One Hand In My Pocket" by Alanis Morisette
Redemption?
I'm pure but he isn't
I'm sure 'til he brings me doubt
I'm divine, he's fallen, baby
If I'm black then he's white
If I'm earth then he's fire
I am his redemption, maybe
CHORUS
What feels so right can it be wrong?
Our passion is healing
And when I say that I love him,
I do truly mean it
If he's hurt, then I feel it
We're that intertwined
I'm on my knees begging for guidance
I'm his princess of darkness
He's the light in my life
He calls me Beloved, Lady
CHORUS
He's Vice and I'm Versa
I'm Day and he's Night
I'm a slave to my emotions
My thoughts of confession
All disappear
I find myself pledging devotion
CHORUS
One touch and I'm hungry,
One word from me makes him smile
His lips on mine give me fulfilment
I'm strong, yet he makes me weak
Though I hate to admit it,
His leaving just damn near kills me
CHORUS
Is he my downfall
Or do I raise him up?
I care but I shouldn't, should I?
No-one can understand,
Least of all I
The Morning Star, Lucifer, Venus
CHORUS
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Date: 2012-06-19 02:13 pm (UTC)Well done sweetie!
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Date: 2012-06-19 04:09 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2012-06-19 07:38 pm (UTC)I like the religious imagery - very powerful :)
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Date: 2012-06-20 07:14 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2012-06-20 05:17 pm (UTC)Very unique.
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Date: 2012-06-21 04:13 pm (UTC)