Date: 2024-04-30 03:09 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] bleodswean
I like this! It moves quickly and your use of dialogue works to develop both the scene and a larger story around it. Nice work! It's always a thrill when something of this depth rolls right out of your fingerbones!
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