Date: 2016-04-09 10:44 pm (UTC)
*applauds wildly* THAT, m'dear, was perfect! The form, the style, the story, the characters and the evil twist!!! Great job here on all the dialogue and internalizations. You kept your story moving, full control of it with every sentence, and you maintained a trim and economical approach. It worked BEAUTIFULLY!!!!
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