Date: 2016-03-29 10:11 pm (UTC)
Wow, I'm really sorry I missed this one for so long! This is a pairing/threesome I never knew I wanted, but now I desperately desire it! I love how you've managed to bring them into a modern world yet still keep so many of their character traits and quirks, especially Leo. Of course he would be reckless and also worried about not paying the rent--that part made me laugh so hard.

I love that Riario noticed Vanessa first and rode in to her rescue. So chivalrous of him! Vanessa is just as lovely and charming as she was in S1-2, with the maturity and common sense that Leo is so often lacking.

Riario and Lucrezia's relationship is very interesting; even though he seems standoffish, Riario must care about her or I'm sure he'd do something more drastic. And I really, really want to know what happened to his father to send him to hospital. It sounds very fishy...

The entire Riario/Leo interaction is GOLD, and I loved every word! Especially how Riario lies so coolly to get what he wants. The misunderstood conversation about art prices was terrific! I love how you always beautifully portray that part of Leo that is a little bit (or a lot) out of touch with the common reality of the rest of us. lol

The Vanessa/Riario date was lovely and achingly in character, and I wasn't expecting the twist that Vanessa and Leo live together!

This story is such a glorious tease because you left me aching for much more! I would trust you no matter where you decided to take this because I know in your hands you could make any or all combinations of these three work. If you decide to continue it, I'm behind you all the way! *__*
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