Date: 2011-11-27 01:37 pm (UTC)
OMG! I'm like this ♥_♥ right now.

I'm totally in love with Kat and this story! :D
There are SO MANY great ideas here and so many AWESOME lines! If I begin to quote them I'm afraid I will have to quote the whole thing.

I'll try to pick some of my favorite of favorite... of favorite... though.

...if you went around yanking their tails it was your own damn fault if you got bitten or kicked...
LOL! :D

Something about the larger settlements however seemed to rob many people not only of their common sense but, she was increasingly aware, their basic decency.
So true.

"What justice is there when a criminal receives care while innocents starve?"
Such a great point!

There was a horse trough nearby and she wondered how badly she would be breaching protocol by dousing herself in the cool water.
LOOOL! :D

"Yes," Kat agreed, both to the water and the fact she probably looked dreadful.
Aww, love it! :D

It was just sometimes she got distracted and forgot about certain details like names or courtesy titles.
For some reason I love this about her so much! :D

"Thank you, your Highness. Is that right? Highness?" Her face fell. "I'm never sure of the right title."
"Neither am I," Kat said and giggled. Madga gave her a look of concern, probably because royalty wasn't supposed to get hysterical. Which showed how much the common people knew about royals.

THIS! I LOVE THIS!! :D

Who can battle the sky to test if it really is unconquerable? It seems a rather silly name.
LOL! Very reasonable. :D

Of course she'd gotten in trouble last time she'd handed out a title on a whim - as much trouble as the Council could muster against their monarch, anyway.
Oh, I'd love to see THAT! :D

"At least you didn't make her a duchess,"
LOL! :D

I JUST LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH!! :D

And of course I have LOTS of question!
What's the Citadel? What form of government is there in this world/country/what-is-it-btw (some kind of monarchy, I get it. But what kind exactly? Is the Council elected or appointed? How much power does it have?). If Kat is a princess her father must be/must have been (which is correct?) the King, right? Is Kat the only child? Why Honor is called Honor? Is it a name (it's very cool, btw) or a title?
Tara is one of the guard and I gather she's a badass chick with great fighting skills. Is it normal in this world or something out of the ordinary? (She's caught my eye cause I just loooove badass women! But you know that).
Is there magic in this world?
BTW Gloriana Katerina is a cool name, too!

OMG I don't make sense! I'm thinking these thoughts all at once and they come out in a one big impossible knot and I can't do anything about it! O_o

OMG long comment is long! o_O
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