Date: 2011-08-24 02:04 pm (UTC)
meridian_rose: pen on letter background  with text  saying 'writer' (dude)
Very irritating. The actual review was this: Just a suggestion for future chapers/fanfics... to work on tense like you would write in the 3rd person. This almost reads like a screenplay instead.

Someone who can't leave a correctly spelt and more coherent review probably isn't worth my time.

Also the screenplay comment bugged me because it wasn't just dialogue. There was lots of character introspection; but she files this away for future reference, noting the flicker of emotion her admission had on him. Who doubted him, and who did he prove wrong – or right? She wonders if it has something to do with his overall demeanour
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