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Title: A Kiss Divine
Fandom: Original/Mythology inspired
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 992
Prompt: For the [livejournal.com profile] therealljidol open topic week
Summary: When boyfriend Tee breaks up with her at a party, she finds herself comforted and ultimately seduced by Dion - vintner, poet, and musician.
Content Notes: No standard warnings apply.


She leaned on the rough wooden railings, blinking back angry tears. The party continued all around her; people laughing, the clink of glasses, the ceaseless rush of the waves against the shore, a bonfire sending bright sparks into the night sky. As if nothing had happened.

How could she have been so wrong? Blinded by love? Lust? Was Tee really so charming that he'd warped her thoughts and feelings into some obsession she'd been powerless against?

His cowardice meant he hadn't even been able to say the words outright. I'm leaving you; that was what he should have said, instead of dissembling, making excuses. "It's been fun, Addy, but…" Tee had shrugged his shoulders and walked away. She'd stared after him, wondering how she could ever have thought him attractive, this reckless youth, this braggart.

She'd known they'd had problems but the breakup still hurt like a stake in the heart. She guessed he'd chosen the party to do the deed so she wouldn't make a scene, or because all his friends were there to back him up, while she was here alone. They'd never liked or trusted her, and she wondered how much influence his friends had had on Tee's decision.

The pain, though initially overwhelming, soon faded to a dull ache, a burning resentment in her chest. She swallowed her grief and stoked the fire of righteous anger instead. This was her repayment for everything she had done for Tee? The betrayals she was guilty of, the help she'd given him to become rich beyond his wildest dreams. Her parents had been right to distrust him, and yet she'd turned against them, believing Tee to be worthy of her love.

Maybe the rumours were right, she reflected. Maybe he did have something to do with the disappearance of her half-brother – not that his loss was much mourned, for he was monstrous by nature, but still…

How long she had been staring sightlessly out at the sea, she couldn't say. Minutes. Eons. Until someone rested one denim-clad hip on the railing beside her.

"Are you all right?"

His voice was cultured, gentle and yet powerful. She shrugged.

"I heard about Tee," he said and she closed her eyes. Of course he had. Her shame was no doubt already being splashed over every social media site by Tee, and his friends, and everyone else at the party. "He's a jackass," the denim wearer added.

At that, she shifted her weight and straightened up, a smile quirking one corner of her lips. "He is." She assessed the newcomer; average height, brown skin and blue eyes, an unusual combination that she found very attractive.

"I'm Dion." He swirled the wine in his glass, making the liquid lap against the sides like a sudden squall in a crimson sea.

"I know." Everyone in their social group knew Dion. His father was a billionaire, and Dion was one of his many bastard sons. Dion had been given a vineyard, and the business was profitable, allowing him to pursue his favoured interests. He was a poet, or at least, his critics said, he wrote poetry. He was in a band too, played guitar, sang wild songs about passion of all kinds.

He held out his glass. "Here. One of my better vintages. The invite said bring a bottle, which seemed stingy, so I brought a crate." His eyes crinkled when he smiled. Not showing off, as Tee would have been, just wanting everyone to have a good time. Generous, that was that they said about Dion. A little hot-headed, but in her experience, what man wasn't?

She accepted the glass and sniffed at the wine. It smelt of late summer fruits and rich earth. When she sipped at it, it was delicious, rich and fruity. Dion watched her with anticipation, delight spreading across his face when she nodded her approval.

"Screw him," Dion said, apropos of nothing. "Or, you know, don't screw him ever again. He doesn't deserve you."

"You don't know me." Her free hand went to her neck, tugging at the silver labyrinthine pendant, a gift from her parents.

"I've seen you around. Heard what people say. That you're brave, and clever, and beautiful. I can see that last one for myself."

She felt her cheeks burn with unexpected pleasure at his words.

"I want to write a poem for you," he said earnestly. "About the way your dark hair curls about the curve of your neck."

She took a gulp of wine, not bothering to savour it this time. "Write me a song," she challenged. "Something with drums and guitars. Something to dance to."

Dion laughed. "I shall," he said, his eyes sparkling.

"Addy," someone called from the darkness. "You coming for a swim?"

She raised her eyes heavenward. "Not right now," she yelled back. Then, to Dion, "I hate that nickname." Tee had insisted on it, and she was damned if she was going to allow it in the future.

Dion leaned in close. "I shall always call you by whatever name you want, Ariadne."

Her full name on his lips was like a prayer, and as his fingers caressed her pendant, she forget all about Tee, swept away by Dion's warm presence.

Dion pulled back and stripped off his jacket and t-shirt, revealing a well toned physique. He held out one hand. "I'm going for a swim. Won't you join me?"

She placed her glass down carefully and nodded. Still wearing her red dress, she let him lead her into the waves, the salt water washing away every last vestige of regret.

When Dion kissed her, he tasted like wine and wild abandon. Adriane clung to him, wrapping her legs around his waist, letting her head tip back to look at the stars and the moon, her hair floating like seaweed behind her.

"Ariadne," he said throatily. "Ariadne." In her mind she heard be mine and in her heart she responded, yes.



There are many variants on the myths surrounding Ariadne, Theseus, and Dionysus. Some identify Ariadne as a goddess in her own right. Dionysus, god of wine and ecstasy is also a patron of the arts including theatre, poetry, and music.
The title comes from "Bacchus and Ariadne" by Leigh Hunt: Gave first a look, and then a kiss divine/And said, ‘Be happy, Ariadne mine.’


Ariadne/Dionysus, Modern AU, Picspam featuring Katrina Law as Aridane and Michael Ealy as Dion


Image crossposted x, y
Sources: x, x, x, x, x, x, x


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Date: 2014-11-06 10:17 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bleodswean.livejournal.com
Oh!!! I ADORE myth!fic and you've done a great job here with this piece! Snappy dialogue! Nice that you know the Hunt piece. I find so few people know him.

Date: 2014-11-07 01:51 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] adoptedwriter.livejournal.com
Great story! AW

Date: 2014-11-10 02:22 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] i-17bingo.livejournal.com
The party continued all around her; people laughing, the clink of glasses, the ceaseless rush of the waves against the shore, a bonfire sending bright sparks into the night sky. As if nothing had happened.

Dammit! When your world ends, and people around go on living their lives like it hasn't... it's one of those things about grief that always gets to me.

Thanks to Walt Disney and subsequent interpretations, I don't think I've ever thought of Dionysus as hot. I like this.

Date: 2014-11-11 10:29 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] beeker121.livejournal.com
I very much like your version of Dionysus, he's suave and charming. You're dialogue is especially lovely, I feel like I know both of them.

Date: 2014-11-13 05:54 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] roina-arwen.livejournal.com
You had me at Michael Ealy. ;)

*swoon*

Date: 2014-11-13 10:33 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] uncawes.livejournal.com
Of course Dion would have watched her sip the wine. to him, it would have been naught but water.
Messing with mythology is fun, and you did it very very well

Date: 2014-11-13 10:50 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] witches.livejournal.com
this is stunning <3

Date: 2014-11-13 04:08 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dmousey.livejournal.com
greek and Roman mythology in an interesting modern context... I like it. :) Thanks for penning!

Date: 2014-11-13 10:43 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] halfshellvenus.livejournal.com
How interesting to see these cast forward in time, and it's funny-- as soon as you described Dion I conjured up a mental picture of Michael Ealy.

I especially like how you shaped Dionysus' modern incarnation here. That was perfect.

Date: 2014-11-14 12:03 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jem0000000.livejournal.com
I'm glad she found someone nicer.

Date: 2014-12-29 06:02 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] et-tu-lj.livejournal.com
Love this. I love that you showed the jackass side of Theseus, so frequently glossed over. Ariadne's great, and I think that's the most tempting I've ever seen Dionysus. Great modern interpretation.

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