Writerverse Challenge

[meridian_rose]

For the writerverse Song challenge.
Title: Redemption?
Rating: PG-13
Original/Fandom: Original
Type: Song lyrics
Pairings (if any): unspecified m/f pairing
Warnings (Non-Con/Dub-Con/etc): contains some vague religious allusions
Summary: I'm pure but he isn't…I am his redemption, maybe

The verses, though not the chorus, are loosely based on the rhythm of "One Hand In My Pocket" by Alanis Morisette

Redemption?

I'm pure but he isn't
I'm sure 'til he brings me doubt
I'm divine, he's fallen, baby
If I'm black then he's white
If I'm earth then he's fire
I am his redemption, maybe

CHORUS
What feels so right can it be wrong?
Our passion is healing
And when I say that I love him,
I do truly mean it

If he's hurt, then I feel it
We're that intertwined
I'm on my knees begging for guidance
I'm his princess of darkness
He's the light in my life
He calls me Beloved, Lady

CHORUS

He's Vice and I'm Versa
I'm Day and he's Night
I'm a slave to my emotions
My thoughts of confession
All disappear
I find myself pledging devotion

CHORUS

One touch and I'm hungry,
One word from me makes him smile
His lips on mine give me fulfilment
I'm strong, yet he makes me weak
Though I hate to admit it,
His leaving just damn near kills me

CHORUS

Is he my downfall
Or do I raise him up?
I care but I shouldn't, should I?
No-one can understand,
Least of all I
The Morning Star, Lucifer, Venus

CHORUS

Comments

[eternal-moonie.livejournal.com]

SO POWERFUL!

Well done sweetie!

[meridian_rose]

Thank you very much :D