Yes! Much better! I hate summaries, too, but have learned the more detail the better. I was penning them too obtuse.

When seamstress Bryony's sister Kerine offers to fulfil the dying wish of their local sorcerer, Emeri, and bring home his estranged sister to say goodbye, (good, now we have these two woman sorted! and the mysterious Emeri, who is dying.) Bryony agrees to move into Emeri's house to keep him company (this is still vauge - why is she agreeing, what does this have to do with the estranged sister, and why does Kerine's presence need mentioning?). Despite her initial reluctance given her lower station and adult age, Bryony is soon developing her latent magical powers under Emeri's tutelage – and, despite knowing heartbreak must lie ahead, falling in love (nice! sparks an interest!).