http://hrhrionastar.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] hrhrionastar.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] meridian_rose 2013-04-19 12:55 am (UTC)

I think it is stronger in the order you have it (Blessed Mother, yet you have never given birth, we are all your children) and I believe you that it's correct English. It still tripped me up a bit mentally to have 'yet' there, though. Sorry to quibble at you!
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