http://hrhrionastar.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] hrhrionastar.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] meridian_rose 2012-09-10 07:06 pm (UTC)

Interesting :D I like the way you've told the story, and the unfairness of Colton getting in trouble for something he didn't do is a nice touch.

I think the last line is my favorite :D

(RKD because it's an epic trio with Aura and Nikolai and Colton ;D)
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