meridian_rose: pen on letter background with text saying 'writer' (legend of the seeker: cara smile)
meridian_rose ([personal profile] meridian_rose) wrote 2012-08-25 05:02 pm (UTC)

Thank you :D As I mentioned, I did feel it was starting to get bogged down in details which would have been better spread out throughout the scene rather than all jammed into this tiny piece - but the story was starting to be clearer :D
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