This was deliciously creepy - the contrast between the beginning, when your central character sees himself as some type of amateur detective, to the mysterious final line.
His horror at disobeying her said a lot about how dangerous she actually was. Then the idea of staying there and drinking tea with her made it even worse.
I like that you didn't actually reveal her secret.
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His horror at disobeying her said a lot about how dangerous she actually was. Then the idea of staying there and drinking tea with her made it even worse.
I like that you didn't actually reveal her secret.