http://brontefanatic.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] brontefanatic.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] meridian_rose 2012-05-16 08:11 pm (UTC)

This was wonderful. I loved the way that you told it from Cara's POV, having her stealthily shadow Zedd while she was trying to figure out what he could possibly be up to.

They all knew how deadly it was to tamper with the past. Better to acknowledge it, learn from it, and move on. What a great line, and so true - for all of us.

And Cara's final assessment was so in-character - understanding that Zedd had things he could learn from the journal, but that she would never keep a record of her own.

The fact that we both came up with similar ideas for the journals/diaries was kind of eerie, wasn't it?


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