I am loving this universe and Kat. Is this just the 2nd fic you've written with her, or have I missed others? If so, please let me know where I can read the others.
As usual, your descriptions are perfect - I can hear the noise of the crowd, and breathe in the scents of the busy marketplace, and each person has his or her own distinct personality even when drawn with a few sentences and words of dialogue.
Kat's a wonderful character, and the fact that she insists on using that name rather than Gloriana Katrina tells me so much about her in and of itself, and the fact that she insists on calling her horse Vince instead of Invincible Sky.
I really want to read more of this universe. You've created a very compelling character with a sensible head on her shoulders, a kind heart and a great sense of humor.
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As usual, your descriptions are perfect - I can hear the noise of the crowd, and breathe in the scents of the busy marketplace, and each person has his or her own distinct personality even when drawn with a few sentences and words of dialogue.
Kat's a wonderful character, and the fact that she insists on using that name rather than Gloriana Katrina tells me so much about her in and of itself, and the fact that she insists on calling her horse Vince instead of Invincible Sky.
I really want to read more of this universe. You've created a very compelling character with a sensible head on her shoulders, a kind heart and a great sense of humor.